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:iconwcs-wildcat:
I think if Maybelene or Cover Girl hired you, they might go out of business or have a lot of people unemployed. You could do all the modelling and photography for them! :giggle: It's true and my honest opinion.

I think you look very beautiful as always, of course. I love your ideas for this work. You seem to look kind of sad here but it's Ok because it gives the audience who's looking, emotion to the photo. I also notice you have your hair pulled back and out of the way so it is not visable. This picture gives the idea you could be a manequin in front of a clothing store. I also noticed the white shirt. This also gives me the idea you could be like a cancer patient in the hospital and sick, that also include the lack of hair and your lips look pale too and the sadness also shows this too. I think your ideas worked so well in this photo. If I were try to do something like this, I can't say how much I would probably mess it up haha. You always seem to do so excellent with your photos. Three great key things I've notice in your pictures I've noticed is, beauty, concept and good overall appeal with shading, sharpness and clearity to the photo. All three things you work in so well. :aww:

I have nothing bad to critique about this. I think you've done absoloutely perfect on this! Great work. I'm always excited to see what you will create next. :gummybear:
The Artist thought this was FAIR
19 out of 20 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconcgiraldez:
My first time critiquing a portrait ...

This one is a positive challenge and I risk telling in a non WOW way my opinion.

I like portraits with emphasis in the face expression and most of all on the eye look.
I like that the face fills the photo.
I like the angle - it has the retro look of the 40s (1940/1950 decade).
I like the colour of the skin (excellent editing) maintaining the pure white of the (?) blouse though.

The photographed model is quite beautiful and transmits a serene but mysterious state of mind.

The eyes expression reveals that the relation with the camera was professional but with no "fears".

I would like a more precise focusing of the eyes but I cannot "judge" that with a low resolution image

... my "verdict" is ... VERY GOOD !
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34 out of 36 deviants thought this was fair.

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yay awsome dude :iconohnoesplz:

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"Today is the tomorow you worried about yesterday." - Mark Twain
:iconunclewiddie:
Yay! I didn't recognize you at first.
I love the tilted crop. You seem to have a knack for finding new and beautiful ways of presenting portraits. I wish I was able to see the picture within the frame.

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Whoever said laughter is the best medicine never had gonorrhea.
:iconfais-moi-la-moue:
YAY <3

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"Move it to the left, shake it to the right ".
:iconjenipho:
Yay, yay, yay-yay and YAY.

This is absolutely beautiful Anni :heart:


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"i don't do fashion, i am fashion."
Coco Chanel
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:iconxfallen-x-angelx:
I think your face and everything is prefect but you look a little bit bald....

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We make our own happy endings...
:iconraniam:
you look so different :O
but certainly yay!

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I'm in love with him and the sea...

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D60
10/1250 second
F/5.6
28 mm
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Sep 11, 2009, 3:21:30 PM

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