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Lumivalge by =FurtiveLungs:iconFurtiveLungs:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Self-Portraits

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because when i get bored, i edit my old pictures.

Critiques


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*PearGirl Jul 12, 2009, 6:15:47 AM
This picture is just beautiful and pristine in every way! You used shadow and lighting very effectively to make the eyes stand out, and the skin seem more pale. It's very masterful, and seems almost doll-like in it's perfection. There are no visible blemishes which whilst not being totally realistic gives the piece a polished and cared-for feel. It must have taken much time and dedication.

I feel like the main focus point of the picture is the lips, as they are the only brightly coloured area, and the shine coming off them makes them stand out wonderfully. There's a lot of emotion in the eyes, the picture's wonderfully arranged and it has amazing impact. Gorgeous work.
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*Hiddenplanet Jul 12, 2009, 12:58:10 AM
If this is the result of you being bored I hope you get bored a lot hahaha I love this kind of work absolutely. I like the skin texture, almost like a kind of "photo on canvas" effect. That in combination with the shadowlines under yous chin gives it a great ballance with the soft tones and the red lips. Possible a thin black line (definately not to wide) would make the face come out even more! I also love the composition where just not everything is visible and where there is something to guess " what lays behind". Just WOW :)
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~HopesDieLast Jul 10, 2009, 11:33:21 AM
great work =D

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~clairamel Jul 10, 2009, 11:38:04 AM
gorgeous

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~KatiesLastSong Jul 10, 2009, 11:45:42 AM
väga meeldib :)

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Sometimes human eyes aren’t enough.
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=M-a-e-e Jul 10, 2009, 11:46:54 AM
and i thought you bought a new cam :(... i love it anyway
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*cantanta Jul 10, 2009, 11:56:12 AM
gorgeous! OMG!

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Mood: Joy ~Wantted Jul 10, 2009, 12:10:22 PM
I can drown in your eyes :heart:

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We live, as we dream - alone.
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~Lady-Angel Jul 10, 2009, 12:12:20 PM
ilus!)) tahaks kunagi kull sinuga midagi teha!

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~XenoPhotography Jul 10, 2009, 12:16:07 PM
very nice colors and focus =)

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:peace:
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~HarlequinFever Jul 10, 2009, 12:23:31 PM
haha. that's what i do when i'm bored, too. :D

worked out great. :heart:
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Camera Data

OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
IR-300
10/100 second
F/3.9
12 mm
125
Jun 12, 2009, 5:56:21 AM

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