Dull

first of all, i like it! very much!

because no one ever writes critiques on one of my photos i thought, well, give it a try and do someone else a favor <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

what i like about the photo is the idea itself, the model, the hairstyle, the facial expression, the neck, the background

what bothers me a little bit is the black fabric on the model itself, the cut (i would have given more space, especially because the eyes are below the middle of the pictures which makes it somehow very "grounded", maybe push it up a little?) and that its a little bit dark, no, wait, the lack of contrast maybe, i can´t put my finger on it but i think there is room for improvement

maybe you can try to use local contrast enhancement on the picture itsself (USM 15%, radius 150, treshhold 0) and let it pop out more

its great work so i would give it a try <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

hope my little critique helped i any way <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

xoxo

robb