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No bravery in my eyes anymore, only sadness.

Critiques


:iconcgiraldez:
The aesthetics, technique and mood of this photo is a challenge again to write a few words not as a mere comment but as a FULL and constructive critique.

It would be a mere cliché talking about your beauty.
YOU are beautiful (not only what is seen ...).

What is more important is the mood that I perceive in your eye and facial expression.
Although a pose portrait you cannot hide some deep and "hidden" feelings from the camera and the viewers eye.

Its impressive in every aspect.

The whole composition is Very Good although I do not like the "shadow" on your right shoulder on the lower left corner of the photo.
A "small" crop would turn it technically perfect ... just my humble opinion ;)

My "verdict" is: Excellent
The Artist thought this was FAIR
55 out of 63 deviants thought this was fair.

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Comments


:iconraniam:
congrats to your parents :D

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I'm in love with him and the sea...
:iconmrfongoongo:
beautifull i like how the hair'a falling!

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My gallery: [link]
:iconrooze23:
flawless. First, you are amazingly beautiful, you are so pretty it's weird. Second. The emotion comes through you eyes so well. The way your mouth is slightly open seems to let pure emotion escape as well. I think it is a breathtaking picture and commend you for your talent and bravery.
:icon2sic:
your watermarks are killing all the beautiful pictures of yours.... why dont you go for digital watermarks or hide them a little bit more? i find this too disturbing to fav this /:
:iconkak-ak:
nice colors!

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life is simple, its just not easy
:iconbedo92000:
I love that song! It is so sad and beautiful.

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"We are every day angels." -Jewel
:iconadriatic22:
Aw sadness, stunningly beautiful.
:iconfemketje:
gorgeous

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-strangle me up inside of you-
:icondinkybruiser:
beautiful

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I don't know what to put here yet, so I will think of something funny or clever to put here later...

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October 3
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D60
25/1000 second
F/5.0
34 mm
200
Aug 12, 2009, 12:42:51 PM

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